Tuesday, June 30, 2009

Raye, at the speed that we're going,
we're going to cause a major traffic holdup.
(and the first car, second car, third car honks)
Raye? dont talk to me. im trying to concentrate
ok fine. elsie? elsie! are you falling asleep?
wake up you've got to help me keep a lookout for cars
from the back. (It's always from the back)
(Those things that come when you least expect)
(and stab you)
(hard) Dont you have a rearview
mirror for that?
(-ly noticeable. the Pain.)
How can i look in front and behind at the same time?
(indeed, how can you.)
Just so you know, going slower doesn't help either.

1 Comments:

Blogger kewei said...

Hmmm. Great work.
Like this one. [a lot]
Is it prose [or poetry?] Somehow i get the feeling that they're not just talking about a car.
Or is it just me and my imagination? Heehee.

11:22 PM  

Post a Comment

<< Home