Friday, April 20, 2007

难以开口

难以开口,不知从何说起
我把心事写在一张信里头
装进默契那封纯白信封
贴上了一枚无价邮票
寄给脑海中的永久居民
地址的部分只写了“未来”两个字
不知它离此处多远
一天我走在平日熟悉的街道
临近家门,见有人从小信箱取出
一封纯白信封。。。

7 Comments:

Blogger hs- said...

sounds like something that can be found in ji mi's books. it's a compliment.

9:43 PM  
Blogger never- said...

wa hushen. you finally made your appearance online! hahaha.

ANDANDAND.
we were supposed to talk that day ): but you left. ): haha but it's okay ((:

and hello celia. (:
i haven been commenting on your blog for quite some time le.

没有地址的信.

4:39 AM  
Blogger C~~~@ said...

HUSHEN!!!! haha tot u said ur internet spoil? fix le arh? =)
thanx for ur compliment. hehe

hello eileen :)

6:54 AM  
Blogger av's number 2 fan! said...

Wow!!!
I read it before and i thought u copied it from somewhere. It's very good! haha u really have potential to become a bilingual poet. Yes!! must try out for choir together!

7:47 PM  
Blogger C~~~@ said...

haha. hello kyna. what has poems got to do with choir? hahaha. ee. think they won't accept us haha. no lor can't be a poet, my poems so random lah.

1:40 AM  
Blogger av's number 2 fan! said...

They are separate issues!
Agh Pt would scold me for my lack of topic sentences.
Anyway, thanks so much for your compliment. even if u were only trying to cheer me up, i really appreciate it! I will write more and think up of a fitting end to my story! :D
Post more poetry on fictionpress too!
& start writing stories, my dear! xD i will give u inspiration! :D Haha I think sitting next to me is already inspirational enough :D
2.4 tmr! Oh man.. agh we cna do it!

4:34 AM  
Blogger C~~~@ said...

kyna =( i can't seem to find ur part 4 at fictionpress. eeee. go fix it soon! i want to read! =) romance stories plus angsty v cool haha.

7:12 AM  

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